Good, but not your best...
I liked it, especially the voice sample, but it was definitely not your best. The synth seemed sort of all over the place, and I believe you should have had more of a hook that varied a little from the rest of the song. It seemed like it was all one "verse" without much change to the synth in my opinion. Also, the hi-hat at around 2:01 seemed a bit dull, especially with one hit. Maybe try a light echo or another (different) hat lightly following immediately (such as a closed/opened hat), I don't know. I think if you made the drums a bit harder at that point (especially around 2:04-2:05 area), that could have been a real climax, or hook if you extended that part with the drums maybe just a few more seconds.
Just my opinion, don't know if it would work or not.
keep it up,
jxl180